tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post2942505753458809045..comments2023-03-30T03:54:49.827-04:00Comments on Apocalypse Madness: The QueenShaunahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13483684096890660524noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post-21995451644300918952008-12-20T23:08:00.001-05:002008-12-20T23:08:00.001-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Dusthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07570918259979103168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post-87170486320259183082008-12-20T23:08:00.000-05:002008-12-20T23:08:00.000-05:00Needed more explosion. But still good.Needed more explosion. But still good.Dusthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07570918259979103168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post-9929224676214555762008-12-12T16:13:00.000-05:002008-12-12T16:13:00.000-05:00lol. Well, that's something I'll keep in mind for...lol. <BR/><BR/>Well, that's something I'll keep in mind for future stories.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13483684096890660524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post-45680897162725024252008-12-12T11:26:00.000-05:002008-12-12T11:26:00.000-05:00But yeah, I think I agree with WW5aive in that thi...But yeah, I think I agree with WW5aive in that this story needs a good "pwn'd!" stamp. That might be something to work on with your writing, as many of your stories on this blog left me a bit unsatisfied at the end. They had great ideas and were awesome up to that point, but then they need a little more "oomph" by the end of it.Gustavo B. Rockwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14515288692337711822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post-74574621039743654602008-12-12T10:15:00.000-05:002008-12-12T10:15:00.000-05:00I say, "Couleur!"This story was fun (killing is fu...I say, "Couleur!"<BR/><BR/>This story was fun (killing is fun...death is fun...). I think it's awesome how everyone on this blog has such different writing styles, as well. Like, look at yours, mine, and WW5aive's. We're all over the radar. I'd say you're off da charts, WW5aive's off da hook, and I'm off da...rocker.Gustavo B. Rockwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14515288692337711822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post-33997760868698098532008-12-11T23:22:00.000-05:002008-12-11T23:22:00.000-05:00Unexpected, but awesome! Powerful imagery used, I...Unexpected, but awesome! Powerful imagery used, I like that. Encore I say!<BR/><BR/>Also, I'd like to point out that this story needs a good "pwn'd!" stamp, as there was so much pwnage. Alcore will agree.World War Faivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11363220706314801518noreply@blogger.com