tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post7279132559287684903..comments2023-03-30T03:54:49.827-04:00Comments on Apocalypse Madness: PossessionShaunahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13483684096890660524noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post-59582036428205995312008-10-17T19:43:00.000-04:002008-10-17T19:43:00.000-04:00Wow, that was a great take on the "monster!" Grea...Wow, that was a great take on the "monster!" Great take on the quote!Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13483684096890660524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post-90995450416913270942008-10-09T13:26:00.000-04:002008-10-09T13:26:00.000-04:00I was similarly dissatisfied with the end actually...I was similarly dissatisfied with the end actually. I tried to change it but it refused to be changed. I might not have actually finished it yet. We'll see if I get the itch and add more.Shawn of Majorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17059270536480568756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2654126234236079361.post-52042386458339793262008-10-07T18:33:00.000-04:002008-10-07T18:33:00.000-04:00I like. Very believable. The last paragraph where ...I like. Very believable. The last paragraph where you repeated yourself seemed a little off, might used a bit more variance in what how you said it, if not what you said, but it was good closer. Definitely fit the feel.Dusthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07570918259979103168noreply@blogger.com