A quote a month. The inspired works.
I have a rewrite:Silence. Sirens. Getaway music..............Silence.
lol that works too.
I like it, but it takes away some of the alliterative charm.
I can just imagine what happened before this...."Eugene, I don't think we should leave the car parked at that meter without at least putting in a quarter.""Martha, look, we're just going to be in M&M meats for like 8 minutes. I mean, (chuckle), it's not like we're felons or anything"*Sirens heard in distance*"CHEEZE IT! It's the cops!!!"
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